We have been writing stories about winter because we are in this season right now. To plan our writing we talked with our buddies about how it made us feel, what it looks likes and how it effects the way we dress. We then used our bubble map to plan our writing. We put 'key words' into our bubbles that described winter. We the put these key words into sentences that made sense.
What do you think of our winter stories? Please make a comment on them, we would love to hear your feedback!
We think you have used interesting words in your stories.
ReplyDeleteBlack Hat thinking - we would like you to work on using a clear and expressive reading voice.
From Room21 Literacy Group